MY OUTLINE

T. Receiving really makes you think   

    A. My family Christmas party

         1. I got some presents, but I didn’t give them much

         2. My cousins treat some of us badly

     B. It’s not all about presents

         1. My mom talked to my brother

         2. She told him that it was Jesus’ birthday

TT. New Years is dangerous

     A. a 6 year old girl struck with a bullet

         1. she got hit when she was watching fireworks

         2. she had to go to the hospital to get stitches

     B. an old man and an old lady held hostage

         1. thret to harm

        2. took over $5000 plus jewelry

                                                           MY PARAGRAPH

       The first thing I learned during Christmas break is that receiving really makes you think about what you have. At my family party , my cousins got me nice things for christmas. But I only gave them money. Also, my cousins treat some of us badly although they still were loved and got stuff. But it’s not all about the presents. My mom was telling my brother that presents aren’t everything. She also said that it was jesus’ birthday!

       I learned that new years is dangerous. A 6 year old girl was struck in the head with a bullet.She was watching the fireworks.She had to go to the hospitalto get stitched up. An old lady and an old man were held hostage in their house.The person thret to harmthem with a knife if they looked at him.The robbers took over $5000 including jewelry.